Hannah,
some excellent work to date and you are really cracking on with the planning work which is great to see. There doesn't seem to be any major issues with the blog posts completed to date and the analysis work looks very good and well constructed - this should put you into the top grade boundary when you research and planning work is marked. A few things that I want you to address:
1 - you haven't uploaded you front cover and contents page for the preliminary task - I'm quite sure that you have completed them and this is just an oversight but can address this ASAP.
2 - Your planning work is nearly complete although there are a few bits still to complete. You can aim to complete these posts over the Xmas holidays as they are minimal and won't take very long.
One thing - I know you have added photoshop blockings as drafts, but you must include some pencil rough sketches as a starting point for the design process. try to add as much information about colour, layout, photo style (shot type, distance etc.) and conventions you intend to use.
3 - You have completed all of the research posts to date and your analysis work is very good. I do think that you can improve on the 3 magazine industry posts - i have added some comments to each one for you to consider. Without these amendments, it would pull your R&P mark down a few points so would be worthwhile looking into.
PLEASE READ my comment on your magazine publishers post.
Well done so far - some excellent work!
Carl.
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